Peer Review SoM

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Paragraphs: 45/50 pts. She had many paragraphs, but they weren't as strong as they should have been.
Quotes: 25/25 pts. It was so close to be being perfect! She had the correct amount of quotes and they were very descriptive and lovely.
Inverted Pyramid: 20/25 It could have been a tad bit more in the inverted pyramid layout, but other than that, it was great!

With an additional 10 points!

Final Score: 100!


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